comment to loyalty

Great detail. You have given several examples to support your point about M's loyalty and how his loyalty is changing. In many ways he is loyal to several but is he ever truly loyal to himself and wha the bleieves in? You do mention actual event sin the play, next time, could you bring in a quote to help suppoet your writing as well. We don't always need quotes as evidence, but it does help. I like your insight into how loyatly impacts M.